在托福写作的评分标准中,有一条标准非常明确地标明对于写作中言语的恳求:Displaysconsistent facility in the use of language, demonstrating syntactic variety,appropriate word choice, and idiomaticity, though it may have minor lexical orgrammatical errors. 将这项标准解释一下,便是恳求言语连接、句式多样、用词恰当、遵从表达习气,能够有单个小错误。可是很多*考生,对于“句式多样性”非常惊骇和拒绝,因为有些考生也许连底子的表达了解自己的观念都很难,更别提句式转换了。
1. The problem triggered severepanic in the city.(形容词做前置定语)
2. The woman presentin the meeting is my mother.(形容词做后置定语)3. A young man in his 20sshould exceed the boundaries and embrace challenges instead of remaining infamiliar parameters.(介词短语做定语)
4. Children kept undertheir parents’ wings are vulnerable to adversity.(非谓语动词done做定语,标明被逼)
5. Employees gettinginvolved in the decision-making process are more willing to makecontributions to their company.(非谓语动词doing做定语,标明伴随)
6. I have something todiscuss with you.(非谓语动词todo做定语,标明意图)
7. Children, who are in theformative years, can be easily swayed by wrong ideas.(定语从句)