雅思写作中常见的调配疑问
为何许多学生分明词汇量还能够,做阅览听力根本不成疑问,但作文仍然无法进步?笔者以为因素除了观念逻辑方面短缺以外,怎么做到地道的英语表达也是亟待解决的一个疑问。而在表达当中,对于词汇的挑选运用则是广阔考生的关注点之一。在这一点上,许多人都抱有这么的过错心态:只需词用得越“巨大上”考官就越喜欢,然后分数就越高。其实不然。咱们总结一下雅思写作评分标准对词汇一项的请求后会发现写作中用词*主要的要抓住两点:有用(effective)和精确(precise)。许多时分,通常你所以为的“高冷”单词,用在某个语境当中会显得十分不适宜不天然乃至不准确,反而给考官留下了不好的形象。这即是为何那些形似词汇量很大的考生仍然写不出好的文章。
咱们来看一个比如:
If schools administered with anyteachers, disorder and lawlessness would arise.
这句话中看起来似乎用了如划线有些这么的“高端词”,但实则仅仅让全部表达变得十分别扭不天然。咱们修改一下,变为If schools were run without teachers, the behaviorof pupils would be much worse. 能够看到用词难度下降了许多,可是全部句子变得清新天然然后更加精确有用。所以考生若想进步自身的英语表达就该先规矩三观,不要在寻求“难词”这条歧途上持续走下去。
那究竟应当怎么进步写作的用词水平呢?我以为学会单词的调配(collocation)才是王道。调配即单词间的天然惯用组合,学好调配能帮助咱们更天然精确地去用英语沟通写作。比方咱们都知道“关注”叫做pay attention, 假如有人说“give attention”天然别人也能听懂,但这么的表达就十分不天然不地道。再说说上面的比如,“管理校园”*地道的调配表达即是run a school, 假如用administrate就显得十分造作不天然。因而,若想在真实意义上用好自个已知的词汇来进步表达,咱们就应当在平时写作说话中不断堆集英语词汇的调配。在接下来的文章中,笔者会罗列若干比如来演示怎么运用准确的调配来改进你的写作或白话表达。
1. 常常锻炼能改进大家的身体健康
Often exercise can improve people’s bodyhealth.
Taking exercise regularly can improvepeople’s physical health.
2. 家长和老师应当削减*看电视的时刻
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's time of watching TV
Parents and teachers should reducechildren's screen time
3. 处理日子废物是当地政府的一项主要任务
误:Dealing with living rubbish is an important task for local governments
正:Disposal of household waste is an important task for local governments
4. 政府应当给出处理环境疑问的解决方法
误:Governments should give a solution to deal with the environmentalproblem.
正:Governments should find a solution to the environmentalproblem.
Find a solution to sth是固定调配,并且没有solution to do这种表达
5. 艺术不是校园的主科
误:Arts is not the core curriculum at school
正:The arts is not among the core subject areas at school
6. 不明朗的经济远景致使了失业率的进步
误:Ambiguous economic future leads to the riseon unemployment
正:Uncertain economic outlook leads to the riseon unemployment
Ambiguous指意义意思的不明确含糊
7. 高昂的费用是大家质疑奥运会承办的一个因素
误:Lavish spending is one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
正:High spending is one of the reasons why people doubthosting Olympic Games.
Lavish指大方或奢华,不好spending或cost调配
8. 空运会发生许多温室气体
误:Air transportation will create many greenhouse gases.
正:Air freight will create many greenhouse gases.
9. 有很大朋友圈的人通常会更高兴
误:People with a large community of friends are morelikely to be happy.
正:People with a large circle of friends are more likelyto be happy.
10. 只犯小罪就遭到严峻的赏罚是不公平的
误:It is unfair to be punished strictly for makinglittle crimes.
正:It is unfair to be punished stiffly for committi